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'Colder by the hour, more dead with every breath.' by Heavensinyoureyes 'Colder by the hour, more dead with every breath.' by Heavensinyoureyes
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This image has nice, soft colors in it. The bright flower stands out against a dark background. While the flower does stand out, a majority of it is out of focus. I can't help but look at the flower as a whole, and the blurry part is the main flaw of this photo. Perhaps having the whole yellow part in focus and the sides of the petals close to the yellow in focus but gradually losing focus would look good if you were trying to achieve an artistic blur, although I do find this an excellent attempt. You have done the blur I'm talking about, in this piece. heavensinyoureyes.deviantart.c… At the least, a larger depth of field would be better. Also, there is some noise in the background, so something to do about that is taking photos in more light to keep that from happening, so you don't have to brighten the photo so much and thus create noise. I do like the angle of the flower and the photo as a whole and I think you should keep taking your photography journey. You have a lot of sharp flowers in your gallery, and this one is different, but it's good to keep trying something new. Keep shooting! You have lots of nice images
-Christy
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This is such a cute flower picture. I Like how the picture focuses on the flower while the background makes a beautiful blur. Most of the petals on the flower are blurry, while a little bit of it stands out very sharp. The purple on the petals makes the flower even prettier at the tips and I like how there is some yellow spots on them too. In the middle of the flower, you can see some details stick up very clearly in most of the parts and a little bit of blurs in the far back of the middle as well. Keep up the good work!
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Premanque Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice :) I think you should try don't put the main object in the center (en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_…photoinf.com/Golden_Mean/Eugen… )
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Ernesto1971 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Bonita macro;) :)
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Heavensinyoureyes Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Muchas gracias :love:
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Ernesto1971 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
De nada, buenas fotos en tu galeria, gran trabajo ;) :)
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015   Writer
Lovely soft focus and colour. A beautiful image. Thanks for sharing.
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Heavensinyoureyes Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much, dear :hug: :heart:
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015   Writer
You are welcome.
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SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely photo, I like the angle you chose. I also really like the title!
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Heavensinyoureyes Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much, darling :hug:
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